Angel of Death

Yeah, maybe I can do without the color red. I wasn't completely attached, anyway. ha ha I used a basket? Okay now I see where people might think this is ...

Thanks all for the critiques, they were much appreciated and I will edit soon. Well to answer everyone's suspicions or whatever you'd like to call them, this is not Fanfic ...

Wow, thanks for the critique Galerius. I was so happy that I actually got one because its been a couple of days and this has went un-reviewed. You gave me ...

A harmless bump ~Angel

Thanks for the critique Ash. I will fix everything that you pointed out. Whew I was hoping it wasn't going to be really bad because I wrote in one hour ...

Thanks times a trillion Bickazer! Your critique was very helpful and much appreciated. I love nitpicks because with the way I think, I would never have found any of the ...

Thanks for the review! Yeah I don't exactly know where that came from but I'm glad you liked it. I'll be sure to fix what you pointed out when I ...

Thanks for the critique lucyy. I love it when people point out grammar and such. Something I'll never be good at. Yay a gold star! You are too kind. ~Angel

Thanks for the critique, as always, Ash. It was really helpful. I'll be sure to PM you when I post the next part. Thanks again! ~Angel :D

Thank you so much tnm22. Yes this is for Cal's contest and wow! I wrote this off the top of my head and I didn't think it would be any ...

Thanks Mrs. Darcy! I really had fun writing this and I appreciate you taking the time to review this. ~Angel

Awe Cal you're so awesome but you already know that. ^_^

~Updated~ -Angel

Present Day John These four walls are driving me crazy. I need the ocean and her face. That beautiful, innocent face. She has a smile that could light up my ...

Diane "How was school today?" I was sitting at my desk, doing the little bit of homework I had, when my mom suddenly appeared in the doorway. Her red hair ...